What is it with these little words? Why do I, on revision, so often find myself switching or removing these from otherwise-unaltered lines? Am I just lazy, or do these variants really change what a line means so greatly? And if they do, tell me what is changing about the line. . . the direction in which it points, seemingly. Something bothers me about the power of these articles. . .
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